Poppy Field - Art in Progress - an update 8/21/2007 21:39

currently is updated by the August 25 version.
oil on canvas
28" by 22"
喜欢这些火红的花盛开的感觉,让人感到生活的希望。。。
lxf_lily at 8/21/2007 22:03 快速引用
Unprofessional first impression:

a little unbalanced. The top half makes a better one.
Nike at 8/21/2007 22:17 快速引用
Nike :
Unprofessional first impression:

a little unbalanced. The top half makes a better one.


看样子每个人的感觉就是不同,我defenitely prefer the bottom half. The only problem is that the top and the bottom seem two seperate tones, seperate themes... not combined very well together, but still very good la!
lxf_lily at 8/21/2007 22:20 快速引用
专业术语就是,下盘比较重.
lxf_lily :
Nike :
Unprofessional first impression:

a little unbalanced. The top half makes a better one.


看样子每个人的感觉就是不同,我defenitely prefer the bottom half. The only problem is that the top and the bottom seem two seperate tones, seperate themes... not combined very well together, but still very good la!
bagofbones at 8/21/2007 22:45 快速引用

your comments are acutally quite professional.

usually in paintings the foreground are well and finely done, and the far is more sketchy. this painting is intentionally a reverse. i think the problem is i actually over-did the foreground - it was rougher earlier. it is a trial. need a rest to continue.

thank you guys.

rose rose rose
wildcrane at 8/21/2007 22:51 快速引用
and you are also right. they are indeed from two photos. 我把俩张像片拼在一起画的.
smile
wildcrane at 8/21/2007 22:53 快速引用
Nike, i have a great idea.

why don't you come with us to have dinner at 大排挡representing your LP. then coming to the MFA to drawing also representing your LP? Laughing
wildcrane at 8/22/2007 10:39 快速引用


updated August 24th

I hope that this one is more consitent in its color tones and values.

After making changes to the ocean painting, I did minmum change to this one to keep its original viatality though not perfect. I decide that the perfection shall be achieved at this stage by starting an another one rather than to re-work too much.

rose
wildcrane at 8/26/2007 11:47 快速引用
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