Please mark the day and the day after 1/31/2011 01:05
It is a dark night
as dark as it can be
even an owl
would go astray

It is a dark night
as dark as it can be
when she casts her eyes down the road
there is no shadow being cast on the ground

It is as dark as it can be
but it is not night
like a falling needle
there is no sound

It is a dark night
and it seems like a void
that is hard to gauge
time is a hole

please mark the day
the day that is lightless
but still there is warmth
that comes from closeness

please mark the day after
the cloud shall pass
memories be buried
it will be another day
The day after, I grow older.

And the day after, I grow even older...

wildcrane :
It is a dark night
as dark as it can be
even an owl
would go astray

It is a dark night
as dark as it can be
when she casts her eyes down the road
there is no shadow being cast on the ground

It is as dark as it can be
but it is not night
like a falling needle
there is no sound

It is a dark night
and it seems like a void
that is hard to gauge
time is a hole

please mark the day
the day that is lightless
but still there is warmth
that comes from closeness

please mark the day after
the cloud shall pass
memories be buried
it will be another day
puppeteer at 1/31/2011 05:12 快速引用
好诗,一种意境,我试着附一小段。
黑夜漫漫,
风拂树梢,
水拍河石,
情绘阳光,
思想远方,

看不见,听不见,想起的,今夜复明夜,
看见,听见,忘记的,今朝复明朝。
chipmunk at 1/31/2011 07:55 快速引用
wildcrane :


please mark the day
the day that is lightless
but still there is warmth
that comes from closeness




很像是埃及人民的斗争诗歌。

当年你也写过类似的吧?
Nike at 1/31/2011 11:04 快速引用
All the past exists
as if
only a dream.
Everything I hold
will be lost,
once and for all.
What is the point?
Of being
what I am being?

I am now puzzled, very badly.

Laughing
Bono at 1/31/2011 11:21 快速引用
大家都很 牛 啊!

湿人们,兔子已经追来了,赶快诗意(一)把!

There is a place that is further than the furthermost
at the furthermost there is a forest
with sun-glasses a rabbit
is dancing over mushrooms
green
yellow
and red mushrooms
are freshly new shoots

There is a place that is further than the furthermost
at the furthermost there is a forest
beyond the forest is a cliff that is bottomless
when the rabbit jumps
it just hangs in the air with the glasses

one rabbit
two rabbits
and three rabbitss
what is the point
of hanging glasses

There is a place that is further than the furthermost
at the furthermost there is a forest
beyond the forest there will have a feast
to celebrate the new year of rabbit!

朋友们,新年快乐!
wildcrane at 1/31/2011 11:58 快速引用
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